Here's the comment that i received so far...^^
Hey!
No don't worry about it!
I took a look at it- here are some things that came to mind.
First off, the attitude and energy you had was great! Keep it up! It's a really important thing to have when dancing, or doing anything as a matter of fact.
As for advice, I would say try to connect each individual moves together, so the moves flow better. (smoother?) There seems to be a gap between moves where you don't know what to do so your arms seem to be confused. There's no right way to "fix" that - it's something you have to figure out for yourself. I think what you should try first is to see if you see what I see (lol). If there seems to be an awkward moment between moves, then that's your que to change up something.
Also I saw that a couple of times you looked down - don't do that! Be confident! Other times you looked at the camera like how SHINee and other idols would do - that's really good! So pretend that it's not just the camera that's in front of you - you have a whole audience watching you. I think that way you can present yourself more.
Finally: practice, practice, practice! No one can get enough of this. The more you go over the moves, the more they seem to flow better as your body memorizes the moves. Muscle memory is a beautiful thing.
I think that's it? And sorry (again) if it's too many words. I tend to babble on when I type...
Best,
-Jin
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Good job ^^ it looks like you have alot of energy but didnt show it all fully. Be more sharp on ur moves. looking forward to your next cover